Becoming a writer has been my lifelong dream.

From a young age, I’d tell Mum and Dad I was going to be an author, an illustrator and a teacher when I grew up.

Dad used to always reply, “Oh, good, if you’re a writer then you’ll make lots of money, and you’ll be able to pay for me to travel around Australia.”

I abandoned the dream of being an illustrator as soon as I learned that basic drawing skills were a prerequisite, but I’ve always held tight to my dream of being a published author.

It’s this dream -and the looming pressure of having to pay for Dad’s Australia trip- that has led me to participate in many writing classes and courses over the years. These courses have also helped me hone my skills as a writing teacher in schools.

As I’ve taken these courses, I’ve been struck by the differences between how published authors teach writing and how we school teachers usually do it.

One difference in particular completely changed how I teach writing in schools. In the writing world, this concept is known as ‘short assignments’.

In the school world, I like to think of it as a ‘less is more’ approach.

Let me explain…

Less is more

In the writing world, I’ve rarely been asked to write a full and complete piece of writing from start to finish in one go.

I’ve always been tasked with completing ‘short assignments’:

• Write the opening paragraph for a story.
• Write a scene of dialogue.
• Write a character description.

These tasks were usually preceded by explicit instruction and worked examples that set me up for success.

Upon reflection, I can see there are many reasons for this ‘short assignments’ approach (some of which I’ll discuss shortly).

Contrary to this, in the school world -particularly in the lead-up to NAPLAN- teachers tend to fall into the trap of believing in ‘long assignments’ or ‘more is more.’ (FYI: Read my blog on effectively preparing students for NAPLAN here).

This is usually characterised by units of work that require students to draft multiple examples of the target genre (rather than working on one or two pieces over time and building them into quality, completed pieces).

My old approach of drafting on Monday and Tuesday, revising on Wednesday, editing on Thursday and publishing on Friday is evidence of a timetable supporting a ‘long assignments’ approach to teaching writing.

Although I never stopped to consider my beliefs about teaching writing at the time, I think I generally believed one or all of the following:

• The more time students spent drafting, the more writing stamina they would build.
• The more opportunities students had to write complete pieces in the genre, the more they would improve their skills in that genre.
• The more words students wrote during writing time, the more they would improve their skills as a writer (after all- you learn to write by writing…don’t you?).

Decades into my own writing apprenticeship, however, I’ve come to realise that if we’re serious about improving students’ skills, knowledge and passion for writing, we need to invest in the concept of 'short assignments' or 'less is more ’.

In this post, I'm going to share 2 reasons teachers should adopt a 'less is more' approach to teaching writing. 

1. The work of ‘real’ writing is in revision

In classrooms, we seem to spend most of our class time in the drafting phase of writing.

Whereas, in ‘real world’ writing, we spend the largest portion of our time in the revising phase.

“It's during the revision process that the real work of writing - the work of good writing - happens. If we're not making time for that part of the process, are we really teaching writing?”

(Messner, 2011)

Good writing happens when writers slow down and consider their message and how best to deliver it to their reader.

This skill takes time, practice, and teaching.

To make time for this practice in my teaching, I had to drop my long-held belief that students needed to write pages of text in every lesson to become better writers.

I had to replace this old, less-effective belief with the new understanding that students need explicit instruction in strategies they can use to improve the content and delivery of their message. (i.e., the CRAFT of good writing.)

I had to explicitly teach them how to revise their writing.

I also had to ensure this instruction was followed up with time for students to trial the taught strategies on their own writing and receive feedback on the effectiveness of their attempts.

As a writing teacher, I had to focus on doing less and doing it well.

Fewer writing pieces overall, but more quality and learning within those pieces.

2. Effective feedback is a necessary ingredient of writing instruction

Effective feedback has many elements to it, but the one that is particularly relevant to teaching writing in a ‘less is more’ approach is this one:

“Next time” feedback is ineffective. The longer the time between receiving the feedback and recalling it, much less using it, the more the feedback message fades from specific descriptions and suggestions to a general memory of evaluation.

(Brookhart, 2017)

Step 1 of effective formative feedback for writing instruction is to give students timely, specific feedback on their writing attempts.

Step 2 is to give students the opportunity to respond to that feedback by providing time and space for them to implement the suggestions they’ve received on the piece of writing for which the feedback was given.

In a ‘less is more’ approach to teaching genre, where students are slowly guided through creating a single piece of writing over several weeks, they have time and space to continually receive and respond to feedback on that one piece.

This helps them better understand the concepts being taught in the explicit minilessons and builds their knowledge of the craft of writing. (The very thing that’s assessed on NAPLAN and, more importantly, the thing that will improve your students' writing for the rest of their lives).

Final words

This approach to teaching writing requires deep teacher content knowledge of the craft of good-quality writing.

It requires the teacher to take on the role of writing coach (someone who knows the sport inside-out and can give valuable tips for improvement) rather than writing manager (someone who assigns the task and tracks its completion with only surface-level suggestions for improvement).

Expecting fewer texts in a genre but slowing down to teach more specifics about writer’s craft within that genre will support students in raising the quality of all pieces of writing they do in the future.

So, if your students ever find themselves having to write a persuasive GoFundMe page to fund their dad’s trip around Australia, they’ll have all the skills they need to do so...

Do you take a 'less is more' approach to teaching writing? I'd love to hear about your experiences over on the Oz Lit Teacher Facebook Group.

Related Blog Posts

• How To Plan For Effective Genre Instruction
• A Crucial First Step In Improving Writing Instruction
• 2 Mindset Traps To Avoid When Leading Change (Part 2)

References

• Brookhart, S., 2017. How to Give Effective Feedback to Your Students. 2nd ed. Alexandria: ASCD.
• Messner, K., 2011. Real revision. Portland: Stenhouse.